G'day Tim,
Congratulations on your engagement.
You're doing a good job on the pattern, but as it stands I reckon your gonna end up dead mate

You have a very pretty wife to be, but you have accentuated all the wrong parts.
I'd work on removing the double chin and the shadows under the eyes.
I'm by no means an expert at making patterns, but having been married for 32 years, I do know when I'm looking death in the face
I'm not knocking you, just offering some constructive criticism.
I took the liberty to play with your pic for about 10mins. Something like this I think, but remember it's your pattern Tim.